Workshop Template Feedback Thread

[El_Scorcho]

Use a footy number, not 97. Try it with 9 or 10. Obviously it's basically impossible to get perfect, but I think the 97 is accentuating the minor issues.

Other than that, that front template looks awesome!

 

[Andonis1997]

Use a footy number, not 97. Try it with 9 or 10. Obviously it's basically impossible to get perfect, but I think the 97 is accentuating the minor issues.

Other than that, that front template looks awesome!

Ones don't look great with the spike.. (which I would rather keep) I'll try 7 and 8 on their own, and then 20 and 43, perhaps?

 

[Andonis1997]

I think Koutoufides might be the way to go, with a little less of the spike on the 4?

 

[El_Scorcho]

I like the spike! I still feel like they are a little bit too skewed to the right.

 

[Gibbsy]

I like the spike! I still feel like they are a little bit too skewed to the right.

Yep. Particularly since all the logos on the front are dead straight aligned, even though the actual template suggests they should be rotated to the left somewhat.

 

[Andonis1997]

Yep.

Particularly since all the logos on the front are dead straight aligned, even though the actual template suggests they should be rotated to the left somewhat.

The NAFL logo is rotated to the left, though..
Anyway, here is before and after:

Pay attention to the three, can't really notice the changes on the 4.
Moved everything to the left, made the side panels much thinner and more realistic and made the numbers follow the curve above them a little more..? Big improvements, I think. Also, look at the bottom of the guernsey. I've made it smaller in length. It's coming along well.

 

[El_Scorcho]

Numbers still too slanted.

 

[Andonis1997]

Alright, last post. I promise. I'm sorry for my spamming of this thread, I just want to get this ready for use ASAP!
Here is my final version for a while. The length of everything has been shortened. I also tried making the shorts face the same angle as the guernseys.

 

[Fizzler]

Thoughts anyone? Stroke was there to differentiate between the shirt and old background. I'll post the .psd link if anyone wants it.

 

[Dylan8]

That isn't a polo

 

[Fizzler]

That isn't a polo

I wasn't sure how to approach the collar. Something weird happens when I end my path and the start point was a curve. Really, It looks like a soccer shirt. It's still sort of a WIP so expect to see some more updates

 

[Fizzler]

Changed polo to soccer shirt. It sorta looks like he's shrugging but this came out pretty good considering I didn't trace anything.

 

[El_Scorcho]

You could do a polo but a polo needs a collar

 

[Fizzler]

You could do a polo but a polo needs a collar

Yeah, as I said, it was a WIP but if anyone wanted the link, it was there for the taking. It looks like a Daen soccer template (just needs food).

 

[Spanna_]

Changed polo to soccer shirt. It sorta looks like he's shrugging but this came out pretty good considering I didn't trace anything.
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I like it, but the shape of the body is all wrong.

 

[Fizzler]

I like it, but the shape of the body is all wrong.

Better?

 

[Klim]

Better?
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Still no where near a polo.

 

[Fizzler]

Still no where near a polo.

Read the side, SOCCER SHIRT.

 

[Bryce_Jersey17]

The sleeves are too thin. No one has a body like that and sticks for arms

 

[The Half Back]

The sleeves are too thin. No one has a body like that and sticks for arms

Maybe it's meant to more extremely skin tight?

 

[Bryce_Jersey17]

Maybe it's meant to more extremely skin tight?

It's still too small. The sleeves aren't in proportion to the rest of the body

 

[Klim]

Read the side, SOCCER SHIRT.

Ok still no where near a SOCCER SHIRT.

 

[Fizzler]

Ok still no where near a SOCCER SHIRT.

Well then how can I improve it?

 

[Cody_]

Thought I would attempt my own soccer shirt.

 

[NM_Mitchell]

too long and too skinny.
Almost as if it was designed for slender man.